look at my bicycle

The color of the bike and the girl's top work great together and the red in the car in the background help balance it nicely. I'm not a fan of the girl's expression... it seems almost too "runway pissed off ugly" or something to me. It makes her kind of....ugly and jarring. The posing, though, is great and it really shows off her legs (good call on the angle making sure you have her other leg visible as well, many shots like this miss that and they end up looking unbalanced). Again, it's a perfect image except for that look. Sometimes we just can't control the way our models faces twitch but I think a more serious, flirty or even confused look would have really nailed the image. I can't tell what she's making the face for here. If she looked more pissed my eyes would go to the flat tires and empathize with her. If she was confused I might chuckle and think she doesn't know why the bike won't go. If she was flirty I would be drawn back to her legs... As it is, my eye just doesn't know where to go with her look.

Again, the image is great, the lighting and exposure is amazing, the posing is great. It's a great image except for that look! Do you have another with the same basic pose but a different expression we could look at?